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by malicous_monk_muppet
Sun May 30, 2004 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Looking for a few good writers
Replies: 13
Views: 6316

Looking for a few good writers

If I may ask, is there a position for a writer who doesn't really know enough about x-men to play a character? What I mean is, are there non-character positions that could be filled? This looks like something I would be very interested in becoming a part of, but I would feel very awkward taking on t...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Juri's Story
Replies: 0
Views: 1544

Juri's Story

Well its been quite some time since I last posted, but I think I actually have something worth posting now. Now the reason Im posting this here is because I cant get a straight review from anyone due to the storys content (its not gross, but just hard to digest sometimes). I honestly dont know if I ...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Thu Apr 01, 2004 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Shankjam's Stories (Updated 6/1 Grief Completed)
Replies: 57
Views: 26463

Shankjam's Stories (Updated 6/1 Grief Completed)

Well done! I loved the first part, always did feel that those x-men costumes were a bit like bdsm getups. Now for the gripes: The pacing was a little fast (which may or may not be what you want, but if it's an arc, prolly not); Not knowing anything about Jared is bothersome to the reader, especially...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Mon Mar 22, 2004 8:32 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Is anyone here a literate RPer?
Replies: 26
Views: 10170

Is anyone here a literate RPer?

Btw I just thought of a good idea and thought it shoudl be written down before I forget. Perhaps you could have one person who sets the scene, says what is going on, ect. (a dm type person). Since message board roleplaying is more freeform (I think) this person's job beyond setting the scene at firs...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Sat Mar 20, 2004 12:57 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Is anyone here a literate RPer?
Replies: 26
Views: 10170

Is anyone here a literate RPer?

Yes, I am. Infact I do lots of online rping, run a session in real life, have written numerous stories, ect. So yeah. Veteran DnD, white wolf player and occasionally dabble in other things.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Thu Jan 15, 2004 2:25 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Kurt...doing..STUFF!
Replies: 5
Views: 3545

Kurt...doing..STUFF!

give him some muscles. If i remember right the suit is skin tight, but looking at his torso it seems smooth. Just makes it look a bit off. Or if not muscles, ribs or something.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Sat Jan 10, 2004 4:25 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Streets (Suicide Attempt and Drug Use Inside. Ye've Been
Replies: 11
Views: 4233

The Streets (Suicide Attempt and Drug Use Inside. Ye've Been

Why wouldn't he use a noose and hang himself? They are cheap (because you can improvise) and not very hard to make. It was a nice scene. Just that if he wanted to kill himself he could find a way :D .
by malicous_monk_muppet
Wed Jan 07, 2004 4:57 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: 1st chapter of a novel: Freelancers Song
Replies: 7
Views: 3790

1st chapter of a novel: Freelancers Song

First off, I am an amateur writer in high school. If i knew the secrets to writing I would have been published by now. So don't take what I say as God's creed. This is perhaps my meanest and most convaluted critique yet, sorry :( . Ok, well let me say I didn't read all of this because I had a hard t...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Thu Dec 25, 2003 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: The Fic That Should Not Be
Replies: 0
Views: 1217

The Fic That Should Not Be

Ok, well I had the biggest case of writer's block for a really long time and went kind of insane. That's when I wrote this. Now, this is a bit different from how I normally write, because well it's insane (I'm not kidding). Anyway, the first part is a bit wierd, but I think the ending will be intere...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Sun Dec 21, 2003 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Dark and Shameful Past
Replies: 18
Views: 6258

Dark and Shameful Past

well now, this is a story I can get into. Delicious, perversly delicious. :evil . I was always a big fan of despair. The fics with that one good person in a world where being good just isn't worth it. It's a nice touch. A fic of my own heart, for better or for worse, I give this installment two bloo...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Fri Dec 19, 2003 3:38 am
Forum: Comics on Screen
Topic: Ultimate Nightie's uniform?
Replies: 2
Views: 4267

Ultimate Nightie's uniform?

I believe that is concept art of Kurt. In fact, the very very first concept art for Kurt looked much different, and kinda goofy.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Tue Dec 16, 2003 11:06 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Logan's Vengance (pt. 1 of Kurt's Death) pg-13 R/R
Replies: 4
Views: 2410

Logan's Vengance (pt. 1 of Kurt's Death) pg-13 R/R

Well, I like what you have so far. I think it fits with Logan, cause that's what he would do, macho to the end.

However,
May i ask what a play timberman coat is?
by malicous_monk_muppet
Mon Dec 15, 2003 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: A True Devil
Replies: 2
Views: 2164

A True Devil

Not really sure how I thought this up, but I just wrote and let it flow. Perhaps inspiration really is just a gift from the unconscious mind. ---------------------------------------------------- Kurt walked into the church not sure exactly what he would find. He was no stranger to the inside of a ch...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Sun Dec 14, 2003 3:11 am
Forum: Marvel Comics
Topic: X-men universe rpg book
Replies: 0
Views: 1557

X-men universe rpg book

I was browsing my local book store when I stumbled upon this curious book that appeared to be an x-men universe rpg book. For all those who don't know I'm speaking of Role Playing Game of the pen and paper variety ie: think D&D or V:tm. Since I'm an avid D&D and white wolf player, I was very...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Sun Dec 14, 2003 2:54 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: X-Comics #1
Replies: 6
Views: 3218

X-Comics #1

Cute, definatly. A bit weird, but cute. Keep it up mate.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Thu Dec 11, 2003 2:02 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Legacy
Replies: 8
Views: 3991

Legacy

I must admit, at first I was not expecting to like this (sorry, pain angst fics annoy me for some reason). However, it was quite good. The image that really stood out for me was when Kurt was asking about everyone else even in his last moments. This was vivid, touching and really stayed true to Kurt...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Wed Dec 03, 2003 1:35 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Time to write a story, how do you begin?
Replies: 4
Views: 2453

Time to write a story, how do you begin?

Inspiration strikes you at noon and by three it's just festering in your mind ready to burst out. You want this one to turn out well so you decide that a bit of pre-writing is in order so that you can share your vision with everyone else. What do you do? What pre-writing techniques do the people on ...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Wed Dec 03, 2003 1:23 am
Forum: Comics on Screen
Topic: Sorry Evo Fans
Replies: 51
Views: 25884

Sorry Evo Fans

Honestly, if you had an imagine inducer and looked like that wouldn't you use the hell out of it? Evo-crawler isn't suave or debenair (sp?), but it's sure funny when he tries. This crawler seems more realistic; he is a bit unsure, a bit naive, and a bit annoying. Whether realism in a show about supe...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Tue Nov 25, 2003 2:00 am
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: spacing trouble
Replies: 5
Views: 2822

spacing trouble

Oh, one other thing i forgot. Is there any way to keep italics? It changes any italics to normal font.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Mon Nov 24, 2003 10:54 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: spacing trouble
Replies: 5
Views: 2822

spacing trouble

Actually its a .doc file :(
by malicous_monk_muppet
Mon Nov 24, 2003 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: spacing trouble
Replies: 5
Views: 2822

spacing trouble

Unfortunatly this question pertains to fanfiction.net and since i can't get a response from their support I have to ask it here =(. Feel free to delete if mods don't want this here. Anyways, when i upload my stories at fanfiction.net it undoes all my spacing (which after finally looking up the corre...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Sun Sep 28, 2003 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: God Loves, Man Kills
Replies: 11
Views: 5050

God Loves, Man Kills

Well, i enjoyed this although something was bothering me. It seemed more that i was being told what was going on instead of actually seeing it, while not wrong it is an interesting stylistic choice. Also, i personally enjoy a more descriptive writing style. Certain phrases like, "I teleport, so...
by malicous_monk_muppet
Thu Sep 25, 2003 9:28 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Couple o' illustrations...
Replies: 24
Views: 7942

Couple o' illustrations...

HOLY CRAP! this kinda reminds me of the vampire the masquerade book illustrations. Seriously though, i usually keep a reserved silence about artwork but this really is very good.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Tue Sep 16, 2003 10:44 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Fanfic and wish fulfillment
Replies: 11
Views: 4776

Fanfic and wish fulfillment

Oh well i actually mean both. I have a habit of having characters change and mold over time by what happens to them.
by malicous_monk_muppet
Tue Sep 16, 2003 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Creations
Topic: Fanfic and wish fulfillment
Replies: 11
Views: 4776

Fanfic and wish fulfillment

Basically, this post is asking your opinion as a reader and any writers out there on what you think of the debate between being true to the original world which a writer is writing about in a fan fic or whether or not new ideas and characters are alright. This is a bit vague so let me explain. This ...