Nightscrawlers

aw, that's cute! I loved the last lines, they had me laughing. And I can so see Cyclops acting like that. Good characterization too. :claps

Heh, well in my opinion it's def. not trash. You've done a good job. The descriptions nice, you have paragraps set up, and for the most part it flows nicely. Keep writing, I'd like to see more background on SheCat. Oh, and what verse is this set in?

Oh, yes, I know. I was just working off that idea to help clarify my own opinions.

In my opinion, I'd rather see a new Storm than no Storm at all. I know, that as a great of job Alan did I would hate to see Kurt leave the movies because he decided he didn't want to do them anymore. If Storm left, especially with the poor excuse of going to Africa (which doesn't seem in character f...

Ah, another Kurt/Ororo fan! This is a very nice picture. I like how you combined comic verse with movie verse, if I'm not mistaken. I see bits and pieces of both. I love this.

Well, this is my first attempt at fanfiction and my first post here. It will eventually be Kurt and Ororo. He will be seeing her very soon. It is set in the future, after all the movies. I'd really like to know what you all think. Thanks. oh, and if there's someone on this site really into this pair...