"Chasing Darkness": a May/June/July-September 2009 Movie Wri

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"Chasing Darkness": a May/June/July-September 2009 Movie Wri

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woah....

My entry bows to yours...
...PIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I apolgize for any spelling mistakes, Its kinda hard to type in a straitjacket...
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"Chasing Darkness": a May/June/July-September 2009 Movie Writing Challenge Entry

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BRAVA!!! :clap :clap :clap.

Beautiful story, excellent ending. You write very, very well.

:D Good luck in the contest!
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"Chasing Darkness": a May/June/July-September 2009 Movie Writing Challenge Entry

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Um, thanks, but it wasn't really that terrific. I think that, in addition to waaaay too many words, the action kinda stumbled at the end and then lay flat. Guess I've read too many of the fine things other folks here have written to be that impressed by my own stuff.

But I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the day-brightening comments!

Now I need to quickly whip up something for a local contest, since that would involve money :D .
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