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The Death of Nightcrawler (Prologue)

They stood around the grave each

holding a red rose. Charles Xavier leaned

on his cane and fought back inevitable

tears. Logan held his hat at his side and

the rose stem rolled between his

forefinger and thumb. He was wearing

dark dark sunglasses. Scott stood next to

him holding onto Jean who was crying

into Scott's shoulder. Hank was next to

her reading some quotes from the bible

about death and meeting up with God.

Emma Frost stood at the end of the grave

lifeless, emotionless. She was upset, but

she held a napkin in her hand incase it

got too much, but she was sure it

wouldn't. WHile the others were decked

out in black she wore her normal X-

unifrom with a black coat around her. She

saw no need to change her fashion for a

funeral that will only last an hour. Besides

she knew that Scott would make them

move on by sending them into some sort

of situation again and the grieving would

build up. It always did.


Rogue, Gambit, and Jubille were behind

her. They all looked sullen and

uncomfortable.


Kitty Pryde ws the one who looked the

most effected by the death. She cold

barely stand, her hand over her mouth

fighting beack the tears and the gasps.

Her eyes blury from the tears building up

in her eyes. Ororo Monroe was trying her

best to comfort her but it was doing no

good. Bishop and Sage were to the side,

and let the close friends be close to the

deceased. As Hank finished up with his

reading a lim pulled up and out of it came

the Fantastic Four decked out in black.

They walked slowly to the grave and each

bowed their heads waiting for Hank to

continue with another verse.


Though no one had notices excepted

Xavier and Logan, Spider-Man stood on a

sturdy branch above the others and

watched, it was the least he could do.


Annie and Carter stood away from

Alex as he watched on in his black suit

and dark sunglasses. He couldn't help but

tear. Kurt had been too good a friend to

him.


"Well, any last words?" Hank asked

calmly. He took in a deep brath and

looked around. Logan raised his hand.

Hank acknowledged him with a nod.


"Elf, was...he was my friend. He was

my buddy, he was a hero. He was what

we stood for, in every sense. A happy go

lucky, bright, caring mutant and an X-man

in every sense of the word. Sure he acted

goofy at times, but he was still classic

Kurt. And nothing makes me feel more

horrible than the fact that he had to die

like this, before his time was up. But...if

you want him that bad God, one of your

closest followers. Well...you can just

suck "


"Logan." Jean interrupted.


"Amen." Logan said.


Bobby Drake and Warren Worthington

stepped in from behind Logan and put

their heads down. Kitty raised her hand

to say some words.


"I already miss Kurt. He was one of my

closest friends, and since Pietor and

Illyana, and all the others." She stopped

to take in a breath and sniffle. "This

seems like too much. But as long as we

all remember Kurt as the happy

swashbuckling elf he was." She smiled at

the thought of him dancing around on the

chandeliers of the mansion with a

wooden sword singing 99 bottles of rum

on the wall. "We should do him honor by

doing so." She hung her head and the

others sat silent for a second. They

looked at the empty grave, the casket on

the lowering device above the 6 by 6 hole

infront of them. And in there was their

friend and fellow X-man Kurt Wagner.

Dead from defending his companion, his

partner.


"Ladies and Gentlemen we are here in

remembrance of our good friend Kurt

Wagner" Professor Xavier said slowly.


"If there was ever a chance to thank

him for what he's done for our team, this

is the time. So Kurt, thank you for all that

you have shown us, all you have done for

the mutant community and all you've

done for mankind."


"And thank you for being a friend."

Scott added. "And for being a leader who

would lead and listen. Thank you for

being the part of our group that made the

day more interesting."


They stood silent again each trying

to think of maybe one more thing they

had forgotten Then Charles smiled.


"I remember the first time he came

to the dinner table." He chuckled a little

and Logan becan to smile to.


"He scared the living day lights

outta me Chuck." Logan said with his

head down still. "Bamfed out no where

hanging on the chandelier and began to

say grace. I nearly swiped his head off his

shoulders. Don't think I've ever been that

startled in my life."


"Remember when he was on that

skateboard?" Kitty said to them all. "And

he was trying to get the hand of taking

corners and he hit a rock and flipped

over. Landed right on his feet and the

board came and smashed right into his

butt." She stiffled an outburts of tears.


"Or the time he was playing cards..."

Jubilee started to say. "Remember we

were all playing cards, Alex you were

there, and Logan, Hank, Rogue, Remy.

We were playing a game late one night."

She sniffled "And he would tap your

shoulder Remy with his tail so you would

look around and he would sneak peeps

at your cards.." she giggled and sniffled

and cried all at once. "And he somehow

kept loosing anyways." They all forced a

half-assed laugh. It was so hard to laugh

about osmeone who was so close.


"well if there's nothing else to be

said." the preist said. "Let us end with a

closing prayer." and as the preist rambled

on about finding the light after the

darkness and recited some of the most

well known psalms, Logan looked at his

fist and clenched it. Xavier entered his

head as he did this.


"Not today Logan. Save it for later,

we're all angry at him for killing Kurt, but

not today. For Kitty Logan, keep it

together for Kitty." Xavier's mind left his

before he could reply, but Charles knew

what Logan's reply was. One day was all

this guy had, and tomorrow he wouldn't

come back until Kurt's killer is dead.



~End~
{of prologue}
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YOU MADE ME CRY! *sniffles* This was very lovely so far....keep writing!
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Ok got some more out of me. I'd write more but i got some friend issues im kinking out. (meadiating really) be back when they're done!
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DONE! the proglogue is complete I will start on the actual death scene later let this sink in for you guys, I don't want to rush it. ONce again, I labeled this as clearly as possible I really want people to read this but if it's too much I understand, but please try to get though it and gimme some thoughts.
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Ok....I have a hunger now and only YOU can finish it! This story was very good. I like the way you end it to rope people in to wanting to read more of it.
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I want more. To sad, but hawe to se more. It's very well writen.
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ha!! why thank you. I plan on finishing it soon Anyone wanna come up wiht a title?
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"Oh dear God, Kurt's dead!"

"Not the Fuzzy Elf!"

"Why is Kurt Dead!"

"Why God, Why?!"
heh, I kid I kid. Here are some serious ones:

"In Rembrance"

"Logan's Vengeance"

"Loss of A Friend"
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Logan' Vengance. I like that. My next piece is Logan's Vengance.
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:stunned Really! *raises hands over head and screams* WHOO!
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Ok Mike, Tell her what she won!

*do de do de do de do*

Well Ty, she won a Subaru Out back, 2006! This newest editon includes four sided airbags, four wheeled drive, GPS locating systems, ....
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I so rule! But what I would really like is Kurt's costume from the second movie:D
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LOL! Ow, you guys are so funy! Hehe, well I kould hawe writen some god storys to if I knew how to write right, right? Hawe a great imagination and a good portion of dysleksia(I think thats wat its cald)

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Bamfman, just to let you know: this would be a LOT easier for me to read if you put an extra line of space between paragraphs. It's awful crowded for me right now. :puppy
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YOu know I do that and I paragraph and it just FIXES it'self to look like that when I"m done I can't figure it out. I'lll try tho Mael, gimme a few minutes.
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Sh** now it looks like a poem! lol o well that'll have to do.
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Here's an idea that may help. The way I do my stories is to first type them into something like word or notepad, and make sure to save it as a text file. (I close it and reopen it to make sure.) Then I cut+paste into the window. It keeps everything, every format change, every comma, every quotation mark and extra line, without trouble or "garbage text" inserts. Maybe that might work better for you?
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You know usually I do that mael but this one I had all these ideas and if I switched to word I would've lost it (ADD and all and these ideas were so goo) so i just started typing as best as i could..i hope you can make some of it out... I'll cut this paste it on word and edit it later when i gots time.
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