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Post by Zuno »

Juat a little pic of Kurt in the circus: My Handsome Demon

I hope you guys like it =^_^=
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Post by steyn »

Nice try.

I can really say I like the shading on his left leg.


Unfortunately I'm a bit too nice to say anything else.
But if you really want critiques you should say so.

Keep on practicing.
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Post by Zuno »

As shown on Deviant art, on the commenting box:
"Advanced Critique Encouraged
This user has opted to encourage critique-heavy comments for this deviation in order to better help him or her improve. Critical and non-critical comments are welcome, but critical comments are most appreciated"

So, if you have some critique I would love to hear it, so I can improve =^_^=
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Post by HoodedMan »

Righto then. I'm not really an artist so I can't give a lot of tips but it looks like you have a good start. It looks massively airbrushed, at least on my monitor; you may want to consider a pencil/Bezier curve outline and then just shading the inside with solid colours.

The anatomy's pretty good though the breast is a bit... (saggy?) and the eyes look a trifle unreal. I think that this is indeed a good start and I hope to see more of your pictures as you develop. :)
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Post by Amamelina »

I'm no artist, but dang! I can cook on those abs! Nice!:pant
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Post by fourpawsonthefloor »

I would agree with hm's first assessment of the pecs - because of the shading being a little dramatic (very high contrast), they appear breastlike at first glance. And as with anything, the only way to get better is to keep on going, so keep it up :).

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Post by german_gremlin »

I really enjoy it...comming from one artist to another. Sadly here is some positive critsism: The red shorts is too bright..tone it down..blend it, his tail no propotional and if ya want him a costume..go all out...no shorts. I love it though. Very talented, keep at it!!!!:chatty
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